The Doctor doesn't like bullies in any shape or form? From Cybermen to Daleks to idiot teens? I can't imagine what it felt like to have all those awful things happen to you, it's just beyond belief that people would act like that.  

I hope that more people read your story and realise that they are not alone, that there are people who care about them.

You describe the wonderment of the stars fantastically..... You sure you haven't taken a trip in the TARDIS??